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[edit] Diction

This article repeatedly changes verb tense.I suggest a more cohesive tone.Unsigned comment by Ingwe (talk • contribs).

The entire article is below-standard. I put an Expansion tag in there, but only because Sources and Cleanup clotted up the infobox. -- Ederchil 15:32, 10 July 2008 (EDT)

One part of this page states that Melian showed great favour to Beleg by giving him Lembas, saying that such a gift was never given again to another man. Yet Beleg was not a man. He was a Sindar. Perhaps the person who wrote it meant to mention that it was intended by Melian that the Lembas would also be shared with Beren- who was a man- or maybe he got confused. I can't say. However, as the page stands, it implies that the author is under the mistaken impression that Beleg Cuthalion was a man.