User talk:Ms sho64

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Latest comment: 11 July 2023 by Ms sho64 in topic Edits on the Cair Andros page


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-- Mith (Talk/Contribs/Edits) 17:49, 5 December 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Edits on the Cair Andros page[edit source]

I reverted your recent edits on the Cair Andros page for various reasons. Your reference to the chapter about the Drúedain from Unfinished Tales with a page number used normal text instead of the template for references to a chapter of Uninished Tales (Template:UT) and was not necessary, because a reference to this chapter already existed. Have you checked which edition of Unfinished Tales you have and looked on the Help:References page if you should provide a page number when adding a reference to this edition of Unfinished Tales? I recommend to you to have a look at the Template:UT page to familiarize yourself with this template. In addition, your statement about the later migration of the Drúedain to Beleriand was not relevant on a page that is about the island of Cair Andros and that already contained a link to the Drúedain page (which contains more information about the Drúedain). In addition, page 227 in the chapter Of the Coming of Men into the West in The War of the Jewels that you added as a reference for the migration of the Drúedain to Beleriand does not mention the Drúedain. I hope that this feedback helps you to get more acquainted with Tolkien Gateway's standards for including page numbers in certain references to certain editions of books and with templates for references for future edits. --Akhôrahil (talk) 12:42, 11 July 2023 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Thank you for the feedback and let me know how to use the template more professionally, and I hope that my future edits will live up to the high standards of the gateway. About the statement of migration of the Drúedain, I had some doubt to include it in the page when adding it to the page, and came to the conclusion that I shouldn't have added it to the page, so it was a bad judgment from my side. And about the Drúedain not being mentioned, though in fact it doesn't mention them in the page, a group of them did indeed migrated with the Haladin through my re-reading of The Unfinished Tales (Illustrated Edition) and the reference that I have used was just showing when the Haladin entered Beleriand and settled in Brethil with the idea that The Drúedain with them, so it was just referencing that. And once more, I thank you for the feedback and I hope that I will live up to the standards, and I hope you understand what I meant with this edit regarding the final issue.
^_^ Ms sho64 (talk) 13:43, 11 July 2023 (UTC)Reply[reply]