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== Diction ==
== Diction ==
This article repeatedly changes verb tense.I suggest a more cohesive tone.{{unsigned|Ingwe}}


This article repeatedly changes verb tense.I suggest a more cohesive tone.
:The entire article is below-standard. I put an Expansion tag in there, but only because Sources and Cleanup clotted up the infobox. -- [[User:Ederchil|Ederchil]] 15:32, 10 July 2008 (EDT)

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This article repeatedly changes verb tense.I suggest a more cohesive tone.Unsigned comment by Ingwe (talk • contribs).

The entire article is below-standard. I put an Expansion tag in there, but only because Sources and Cleanup clotted up the infobox. -- Ederchil 15:32, 10 July 2008 (EDT)