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I believe that picture should be deleted. It is almost pornographic, and doesn't fit the Melian of the books. --[[User:Narfil Palùrfalas|Narfil Palùrfalas]] 17:42, 24 April 2006 (EDT)
== Diction ==
This article repeatedly changes verb tense.I suggest a more cohesive tone.{{unsigned|Ingwe}}
 
:The entire article is below-standard. I put an Expansion tag in there, but only because Sources and Cleanup clotted up the infobox. -- [[User:Ederchil|Ederchil]] 15:32, 10 July 2008 (EDT)

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Diction

This article repeatedly changes verb tense.I suggest a more cohesive tone.—Unsigned comment by Ingwe (talk • contribs).

The entire article is below-standard. I put an Expansion tag in there, but only because Sources and Cleanup clotted up the infobox. -- Ederchil 15:32, 10 July 2008 (EDT)
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