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There is a problem in this sentence: "When the forces of Angmar reached Weathertop they besieged it, and did so until they finally broke were subsequently burned then razed the fortress to the ground." It looks like after the word "broke" something has been lost and then a new sentence (with the front part chopped off) begins with "were subsequently...". Since this is a recent article hopefully there is a fresh fix in mind. | There is a problem in this sentence: "When the forces of Angmar reached Weathertop they besieged it, and did so until they finally broke were subsequently burned then razed the fortress to the ground." It looks like after the word "broke" something has been lost and then a new sentence (with the front part chopped off) begins with "were subsequently...". Since this is a recent article hopefully there is a fresh fix in mind. | ||
Gamling 23:14, 24 March 2011 (UTC) | Gamling 23:14, 24 March 2011 (UTC) | ||
: Oops I shall fix my mistake. Thanks Gamling. --[[User:Dwarf Lord|Dwarf Lord]] 00:06, 25 March 2011 (UTC) | |||
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There is a problem in this sentence: "When the forces of Angmar reached Weathertop they besieged it, and did so until they finally broke were subsequently burned then razed the fortress to the ground." It looks like after the word "broke" something has been lost and then a new sentence (with the front part chopped off) begins with "were subsequently...". Since this is a recent article hopefully there is a fresh fix in mind. Gamling 23:14, 24 March 2011 (UTC)
- Oops I shall fix my mistake. Thanks Gamling. --Dwarf Lord 00:06, 25 March 2011 (UTC)
