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In the vales of Aryador
 
In the vales of Aryador
 
By the wooded inland shore
 
By the wooded inland shore
Green the lakeward bents and meads
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Green the lakeward bends and meads
 
Sloping down to murmurous reeds
 
Sloping down to murmurous reeds
 
That whisper in the dusk o'er Aryador:
 
That whisper in the dusk o'er Aryador:
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To hunt the mountain-shadows in the pines?
 
To hunt the mountain-shadows in the pines?
  
She is lost among the hills
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She is lost among the hilles
 
And the upland slowly fills
 
And the upland slowly fills
 
With the shadow-folk that murmur in the fern;
 
With the shadow-folk that murmur in the fern;

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